Barrow CE Primary School

As a class we’ve been doing poems but mine is not finished. Can you help me finish mine because I’m stuck? I need as many people as I can to write another two lines for my poem then I could finish It. My poem is called

“Fighting with my brothers”

At home all alone, just me and mum, what can I hear, oh no It’s the bus from school

my brothers are coming through the door!

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by Adam Hark

If you want to contribute then leave your line in comments.

Our topic this term is the Ancient Greeks.I have been researching the geography of Greece.Here is my presentation…

 

I have been asked to write a poem entitled shopping with mum but im stuck i’ve only done the first verse. please can you help me by writing the next two lines. i would like this peom to rhyme so please can you help.

if i get enough people writing two lines each i can put then all together as one poem.

i hope you can help-i would like my poem to rhyme because i think it is a fun way of writing. you can help by leaving a commet. PLEASE HELP ME. i need your help.

click here to veiw my poem

This is my poem about hobbies i would like you to contribute because as a class we want to know your opinons. I need a few more lines added to my poem so can you contribute some lines on add a coment so read on. (try your best to rhyme)

Hobbies

I like to play on my Nintendo DS but the bad thing is my bedroom’s a mess.

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by Jack Hammond

I have written a poem about Pandoras box

click here to see my poem

My name is Oliver and I’m writing a poem about hobbies. My teacher had an idea the idea was that if we write the first one or two lines and we could then ask other people to contribute a line for the poem as well. I f you want to do this then please add your name and where you are from plus a new line for the poem. After you’ve done this tell your mates to contribute a line as well and then we will be able to write a shared poem which will be brilliant because it will lots of people’s ideas and not just mine. Remember you might have a chance to be a part of a poem thats on the web. I would like my poem to be an acrostic poem so leave the letter that starts the sentence that you contribute the letters of choice are o,b.b,i,e,s then leave your line( Ive already done h) To leave a line just leave a comment with all the info I need and then i’ll choose six lucky peoples lines for the poem. Don’t worry I won’t take all the credit for my self i’ll put the names of the people who’s line is part of my poem. Please write in English if you can. The first line of my poem is:

Hobbies can be so much fun when you do them in the sun.

Thanks!

In my class we have been asked to start a poem for people to recomend the next few lines .Please leave a line or two for me to put into a poem created by me Mitchell Joneswith your suggestions in it.Thank you don’t forget to leave your name when you leave a suggestion.

These are the first two lines of my poem

I play football it’s quite hard

My PSP is difficult and sometimes very easy

Hello, I have been asked to write a world wide poem, this poem is no ordinary poem because rather than just having one author, the world is the author so if you to join in come and take part and to take part all you have to do is contribute a line of the poem oh and please leave your name so if and when it gets published we will know who helped with this poem. My poem is about the solar system so every one can join in world wide! Please could you include strong descriptives and rhyming words!
p.s if i get enough lines from people it will be published and loaded on to Barrow Blog thankyou for joining!

to help you here is the first two lines:

staring up into the sky looking at the moon,                                                                  wondering what other planets are up there alone.

  

I have been asked to create an interactive poem.The subject I have chosen is ‘In my spare time’.I have chosen this subject because it is a great way to find out about other people.So if you would like to write  two lines about what you do in your spare time please feel free.And when I have enough contributions I will publish the completed poem for all to see!

If you want to contibute click on comments (below) and write your two lines.But don’t forget to leave your name!

Ok here we go the first two lines…

I like to compete at archery and hopfully hit the gold

it’s a very good place to hit or that’s what I’ve been told!